extreme beastiality

Life…. what is it worth what point dose it carry …. i can't sleep at night anymore. the ground is o hard and the air is so cold …. there seems to be infinite stars in the sky.Yawn I'm way to tired i want to sleep. I should head in soon it's really dark out. I'll just rest my eyes a bit..and…yawn……(zzz), crash "whats that sound" It's so silent, crash "ok what the hell is that noise". My whole door was busted including the fram which is stone, "that sound came from my house", the house was ringing with the sound of past action.

I took a look everything was on the floor "what happened". upon further expect ion there was a smell… the smell of blood.My arms and leg started to tremble, the only thing i had on my mind was "MOM…DAD". There was no response so i ran down the hall. There was blood " I-IT'S EVERY WHERE ", chunks of bone and flesh where found randomly cast across the area.For a second i couldn't comprehend what i was seeing.

I fell to my knees tears flowing down my eyes, my site had gone blurry i was unable to hear. "why…why who did this why did they do this", by this point i was rolling in sadness rolling in my parents fresh blood. I was in the corner when i heard a sound. I see a figure on the ground i thought to myself " tom" i heard it from the shadows"MOTHER" i shouted with hope.Highly disfigured i put her in my arms and pulled her into my chest, which was pounding from my recent discovery. once again tears filled my eyes. "come closer" she told me which i immediately followed,"run away they'll be back",and before i could ask her she coughed up a mouth full of blood in my mouth and died in my arms.

i became sick and disoriented, what do i do now. i must have spent the next couple hours crying in that hell hole until i eventually passed out. I woke up the next morning with her still warm flesh in my arms, my tears and her blood mixed. I then proceeded to bury her before leaving, along with my fathers remains. I then followed this action by burning down as much of this house a possible.every second filled with agony.

it was amazingly hot the fire was, with embers shooting everywhere. Anger….anger was the key feeling in my heart , with sadness occupying my soul."at least they got a proper burial by there favorite tree" i told myself.

I prompted to head east i had no destination,no name,…no one and at the age of 14 this is a hard fact to face.the wind blew harder that day,and the sun was to sad to say goodbye. the grass was rippling beneath my feet, which proved to be a dramatic scene. all i took where the clothes on my back , a bow and a feww arrows(for protection), and my mothers pendant.

I walked all day without eating a bit, it's was almost night so i made camp inside a hollow tree trunk,which was huge. I went to sleep… alone…for the first time in my life. I had a hard time doing so with the whole ordeal and all. But like all thing i eventually did . I woke up in the morning to the sound of rain drops putting out the fire i built last night. "It's time for us to move on, on our way to east we are" i often our ,we, and us to make myself feel less alone(it never works)

to be continued
thanks i think i might have rushed it a bit i agree with taking more time although i didn't see that many typos when i was typing it, thanks for you comments I'm currently working

on the next one it should be out tomorrow I'm actually writing a rough for this one i promise the next ch will be better as for mood i was aiming for dark see you can either start really happy of really sad there is going to be a lot of dialog though but the story moves nicely by the way whats your opinion on dialog…. thanks for the time and

comments I'm working harder on the rest of them maybe if i lucky it can get to be interesting like dragon x which is the story the got me in the mood to do this one

ch 2

I think it’s time to go out to get some food I’m starving, “it’s still raining “I should be able to get something. Squish the soil went beneath my feet “dame” it’s going to be harder to be quiet. I walked for about half a mile when I finally heard sound coming from a set of bushes.

I pulled out my bow “I don’t know what it is but I’m starving“, I pulled the arrow back the wind was blowing in my face the rain was still pouring , thump I let the arrow fly. With great speed and accuracy, I hit the target, I was excited to see what it was. I heard a yelp sound I then noticed the arrow sticking out of the bushes. I decided to investigate it , just when I got to the bushes a creature popped up and head butted me.

When I finally woke up from being unconscious I saw a scale creature in front of me. He was In my face so it was hard to focus at first. After a second I confirmed that it was a “d-dragon” I said out loud, he was a smaller dragon but none the less a dragon. “What about it” he replied which took me back “you can talk” how about you take this out of me and maybe we’ll talk” which he said irritated .

Well I was in no position to say no, besides I need someone to talk to it’s still raining why won’t it stop I also thought. It appears I had shoot him in the ass I couldn’t but to chuckle a bit “of all places “ I said to myself. Which I think he heard because he sneered at me for an instant so I stopped . It was pretty deep I will add “ well you’re a good shoot “ I chuckled again because of his obviously sarcastic remark. Blood was everywhere this made me feel really bad, because it looked like it hurt and it was my fault.

It took about a few minutes of wiggling which by the look on his face I could tell he didn’t like so much. Then pop it came out quite a bit of blood came gushing out with it, I felt low because I couldn’t stop it “don’t worry about it I actually feel relieved”. This made me feel better “so boy what’s your name” “Tom you” “Kelzar” he stated, “ you doing out here” “none of your business”, I still didn’t want to talk about the incident yet to a stranger. In a joke manner “your acting like someone died or something” I immediately busted out in tears and started running the other way.

It was several minutes later when he stopped by my tree in a obvious attempt to apologize. I wanted none of it god it’s still raining” what do you want”, I told him while throwing a few rocks I had lying around. He apologized for what he said saying “I had no idea “,I countered his action by turning my back to him. He nuzzled his under my arm and licked my neck , I had to laugh after all ticklish. “Don’t you have a place to be” I shook my head “how old are you “ ”14” “young are we” I nodded my head. “ Do you have anyone you could go back to”, I shook my head by this time the tears where gone, “I guess your coming with me”. The rain finally stopped that instant, I smiled and agreed.

This was huge there was little chance of me surviving on my own. I asked him “where we headed “ “east” “same here” “LETS BE ON OUR WAY EAST” I exclaimed , this time I’m not alone.

4 years later

Wow I can’t believe this is the 4th anniversary of the day we met I’m now 18, “wow 4 years already“. Man Kelzar has been taking good care of me, I have been pretty well feed. Kelzar is currently 20 I have gotten a lot stronger since we met, we are real close he’s like a big bro to me, we’ve gotten each other out of a lot of trouble. Today is a great day unlike 4 years ago the sun is out nice calm breeze cherry blossoms floating through the sky one could lose themselves in this. Kelzar being young yet is about 9-10ft tall, he has a great scale pattern of red with white dots, he’s of medium build but he’s always getting bigger, with about a 25ft wing span so he towers me.

We just finished eating it’s just about dark now, it’s going to be cold tonight I can tell I can feel it. He usually keeps me warm with his belly, it’s always keeps me warm. Although he’s been acting funny lately, he’s been unusually light mannered , where as he’s normally a hard ass. He’s been a lot more playful lately, a lot of energy dude has been having lately. He’s been nudging me more lately during bath time like he’s been hinting a something, maybe Kelzar just in a good mood besides it’s spring.

“A Kel time to sleep”, “wow your eager to sleep” “yep”, “good night Kel” “goodnight tom”

A few hours later

It’s cold out I think I’ll move closer to Kel since he’s always warm. Alright good spot…bump…”oh…that’s his” while I was saying that his dick started to unsheathe. I know this is my buddy and all but I couldn’t take my eyes off it. It was huge a few inches longer than a horse and a bit thicker to. I thought mine was good at 11 but his while I was in that thought, he looked over at me. I was stammering all he said was “it’s about time”.

I didn’t know what to do I mean I been with him since I was young….”oh what the hell”. I grabbed it and started jacking him off he immediately started moaning, “that’s what I’m talking about he said” he had started pre Cumming . It had landed in my mouth it had a strange taste to it, it wasn’t bad in fact I didn’t mind at all. So I gave it a few licks I liked it even better by this point the was moaning like crazy which started to turn me on. I somehow got it to fit in my mouth he jerked real quick so I knew he liked it, he squealed real quick and started thrusting lightly. A few minutes had gone by the cave was steamy I by this point was undressed, he was now louder as I was both pumping and sucking his dick. He was thrusting harder by this point I was now extremely horny which only increased when he grabbed my ass, I started foundling his balls which where huge. His pre cum was all over me and there was sweet a lot of sweet, a long ..long while later he finally came the force almost knocked me over but I was determined to finish, about a half minute later he finally stopped I couldn’t last that long so I ended up with even more on me.

Kel was in a state of satisfaction which drove me crazy with horniness after a while he finally came to his scenes, “ oh I almost forgot” he said he reached over and grabbed my throbbing cock. “It’s your turn “ he said when he finally got his breathing under control, he gave it a few licks he then nodded in approval he gave a few licks to my balls I really liked that, all the way to my ass hole. He was afraid to bite my member so he grabbed my cock(claws retracted) and started pumping away. I managed to make my way on his stomach so the heat only turn me on more, and with access to my ass he started lick it which was a great surprise. I was moaning loud as hell by the time we got this far, I reached behind me and started playing with his ass to he began wiggling he also started breath heavily again. I was close to climax , and finally without warning he stuck his toung up my ass and I let loose a stream of cum. Not as much as his but a pretty decent amount, he prompted to lick it up we both just laid there not moving our heart beats became one. There was a mixture of sweet and cum a over the place but that wasn’t of any concern.

After a minute “so this was what you where hinting about”. “that’s what I call a anniversary gift” “ yea I agree Kel, happy anniversary” “you to good night”. And like that it was quiet all tension was relieved , like that we both fell asleep, under the light of the full moon which never looked better.

To be continue

thanks for the tip I'll make a new like when a char speaks, i do agree that is much easier

as for the spelling i did all my writing in word so their couldn't have been spelling errors and I ran it through spell check but none the less stuff like " i " wouldn't have been picked up so i understand great advice I want to make this the best story as possible and these small hints will go a long way with ch 3.

which is starting to come out rich with goth and foreshadowing along with some good vibe .
It may turn away some casual readers but i like to focus on the darker side of things because life it self is dark and mysterious.

i just hope i get this done before you get your next ch done so it doesn't look like i stole ideas well thanks again your advice will be well used

… lacuna coil rocks

chapter 3

I woke up later that night
“That was different” I said to myself, trying to think how it all happened. It would be easier to think if I wasn’t so sticky, I looked over I never noticed how peacefully Kel sleep before. So happy why can’t I be like that why must I always lie awake at night. Well that explains the way he’s been acting, I should try to sleep before it’s morning.

A few hours later

I just woke up
“Nice day” I said aloud Kel had just woke up when I said so.
“Hey Kel “ “hey tom” … it was quite of a bit,
“I’m about to go get washed off you coming” “sure” . I first washed my clothes which where starting to get crusty. I then opted to take a swim ,
“Come on in Kel waters great” , “ of course I feel like a good swim”. Today theirs a lot of sun and wind they compliment nicely, splash
“well it’s about time you got in”.

“ I was thinking about last night Kel “,
“don’t worry about it” the water was clear and I was just floating. Life what dose it mean how dose it feel to be happy … truly happy.
“Kel are you happy I mean truly happy”
“of course “
“what dose it feel like to be …truly happy”
“It feels like you are complete”
“complete….. Not once have I felt anything close to this, I only feel hurt and a deep anger”
“I was part of the background nobody saw anything in me, I was always pushed away looked past”
“nobody deserves that kind of treatment, it pains me to hear that”

He then just stared at the water feeling upset about what I had told him,
“lets get something to eat I’m starving”
“sure thing buddy”. I then got dress and got my bow, I wasn’t in the mood to eat but it made him happy to see me do so.
“Yip yip” that goes back to when we where younger, I then hoped on his shoulders as we ascended to the air. The air in my face made me forget about my troubles… a little, as we flew we spotted a few deer. I then readied my bow and shoot off a few arrows I watched as they smashed through the skulls of the family of deer’s. Blood went every where as they fell lifeless on to the soft green grass they where grazing on . Some reason I always seamed to enjoy this very much like I enjoyed killing or something. They never saw it coming, their life stripped away in an instant.

We made our landing, and inspected the carnage up close, their souls where now sleeping forever.
“your aim just gets better and better” I went and touched their blood, feeling enveloped me a scary feeling the feeling of dieing . I took a step back , I felt cold , I felt empty I actually felt guilty.
“Are you alright man … a answer me” I just stood their,
“…..yea I’m okay… lets take our meal …and go” I held one of the babies in my arms. The air tasted sour the wind stopped blowing, all I could think about was death and insignificance.

We cocked our meal when we got back, by this point I was actually hungry. I don’t know why I’m feeling the way I am, well it did taste good I can’t deny that.
“Are you sure your okay”
“I don’t know, I don’t want to talk about”,
“well okay then… I’m done eating so I’m going to head to bead”
“oh…good night then”. I had my deer cocked I usually eat it mild but I couldn’t stand the sight of blood right now. Today is the third and final day of the full moon , after I finished eating I just starred at it something about it makes me feel better. I then drifted to sleep somehow although I wasn’t tired at all.
I my first nightmare in a long it started on a dark windy night, the moon was full but it was red like blood. Everything was black white. The line of sight was blurry, this wasn’t from my eyes I noticed as the creature made it’s way to a big door. That’s… my door suddenly a loud roar was let out, it was the kind that would make your heart sink into you. He then prompted to bust the door down and with incredible ease, there where two people in the house my mother and father. They where smiling, happy , …alive until they looked over at the intruder in their home. I could smell their fear as if I was the creature it self the anxiety was also in the air.

Before they could stand up he whipped his tail knocking everything to the ground. This creature picked up and threw my mother to the next room, their was a loud crash. He turned to the man in front of him the creature lowered his head and rammed his horn into my father, who went flying to the wall. Blood pouring onto the floor from his chest he knew he was going to die. Swiftly and sudden the creature took his claws stuck them into his prey, and with his teeth started to ripe off his arms and legs. Screams and more screams went through the air along with blood which only made the creature act more feverishly. By this point blood covered the walls which where also lined with his guts, I couldn’t take this scene any more.

Why did I haft to relive this day , and through his eyes of all ways to do so I want to look away but couldn’t. this creature… this dame creature prompted to have his meal. my father was not of the dead yet I felt anger and sadness, why was I feeling so sad, I then noticed the creature was starting to cry. What did this mean he was still eating but he was sad to like he didn’t want to or something.

He then turned to the room where he had thrown my mother,… he still wants more just go away I was thinking. He opened his mouth and readied his claws he took a step, out of nowhere he stopped moving. She was staring at him into his eyes, … my eyes just then it hit me. He let off a roar I started screaming, I woke up screaming sweating all over the moon looked red.

My body was all tense and bulked and a little dry. I just laid their under the moon screaming in rage screaming in sadness screaming with the truth. I - It was me I did it I killed them , but I was outside
“how could I do such a thing “. My body went numb my heart pounded faster I was scared what if it happens again, and did it already.

A warm touch laid on my shoulder I looked back tears flowing down my eyes, he looked at me tears flowing down his eyes as well. He then hugged me
“it’s not your, fault it’s not your fault”,
“you don’t understand” I told him.
“It’s all my fault”
“we all feel responsible when someone dies”
“but it is … I KILLED THEM”. It went silent he kissed me ,
“it’ll be okay” he then kissed me again I turned so it landed on my lips. We just kissed for a while his wings wrapped around me as a sign of protection.
“I won’t let anything happen to you”

The color of the moon went back to normal, it was so beautiful we looked into each others eyes. I nodded at him he then slid his hands down my back, my clothes already removed. He took one of his fingers and inserted it in my ass which hurt a little, he then started fingering my ass. It soon felt better good actually, his intent was clear to me I started to moan.
“I see you like it now number 2”, with that he started to insert the second one it didn’t hurt as much for he took his time. I then grabbed a hold of his cock which got hard in my hand, pre- cum started to come out. The whitish fluid went everywhere as I jacked him off, he just got finished getting the second one in it felt even better.

He picked up the pace he was starting to get impaccent, I was moaning kind of loud at this time. So was Kel he then inserted the third one, kind of fast I would add. Which hurt but I didn’t care I just want him in me, which is where he wanted to be. Finally he got them all in,
“you ready it’s a big one”
He turned me around his slippery cock got away from me, he pulled my ass open
“you got a great ass”. He aimed his well sized member for my ass, with one thrust he went all the way in.

Oh that felt to good, he started to pump his hips first slow, then he started to go faster. I was moaning like crazy it felt to good, and just the right fit. His honking member went in and out with little splashes and squish sounds. He put on hand on my hip and the other around my cock, he started to jerk my off. This combine with the fucking was to much for me, I felt waves through out my body. Kel was really enjoying himself his pace had nearly doubled he was letting out little grumbles. I then added to this by backing into him when he thruster forward I almost came on the spot.

I was trembling from the pleasure, I could feel from his convolutions that he was just about ready to cum. We where both really sweaty, and caught up in the moment. I looked back at him ad we began to kiss again while he was still fucking me of course. He was now using his hand that was on my hip, and started rubbing the inside of my thigh. The pace then slowed down he went from short quick thrust, to long slow thrust testosterone was in the air.

“I’m going to cum “ he roared in no time my already filled ass had less room to carry this whitish substance. He started panting drenched with sweat and covered with his own cum, he did not stop jacking me off. For I was also near climax he lowered his head and prompted to lick my already sensitive balls. I was unable to handle it anymore, I then blew my load in his face. I had never felt better in my life , and I feel a lot better than earlier. He then licked his face off and my member, making sure he got all of my juice. He was soft so he pulled out his cock slapped his thigh,

“That was some great fucking their”
“yes it was Kel “

We just laid their looking at the moon, satisfied add in love I never thought I’d be in love with a dragon.
“Kel what happening to me “
“What you mean you look normal”
“For some reason I feel …less human”
“Less human”
“I can’t explain it, but I just feel different”
“How about we sleep and worry about it in the morning”
“Yea that sounds good” but little dose he know I won’t be getting much sleep. Theirs something about the moon and I’m going to figure it out. I then closed my eyes me and Kel just laid their trying to sleep in each others arms, his wings shielding me from the wind his body was warm. I felt safe with him ,
“good night tom”
“good night Kel” and we where out.

To be continued

thanks for reading
thanks I understand where you are coming from but why dose everyone talk about misspells are aren't any I ran spell check and everything this drives me crazy, but I understand you are trying to help so thanks . grammar I say you may have got me their, I am however a natural American citizen so it makes me sad when people think other wise . I just talk funny so the words translate that way given the fact it sounds right when I speak them

And I don't have any one to read over it, this isn't exactly something you hand to your best friend to read. Like I said before how the story goes is purely based on how I feel emotionally, so if it doesn't make sense them how I feel doesn't either.

Thanks for being honest even though I'm sad now
let me start off by saying thanks for the advice, and for the compliment I feel much better now . I'll try even harder the next ch to make sure their are no stupid errors hindering my story.

Oh I your guys opinion is their to much dialog in the story, because I know from experience that their is such a thing as to much dialog. thanks everyone for reading I hope you guys enjoy it.

And for all of yall that that just read, feel free to drop a few comments this way I know how to make it better for everyone that reads.
>that may be of limited use, as a bunch of the errors i noticed were homynom errors (your/you're), but it would help with the tense errors, like shoot and shot. these still plauge me when i write, despite the fact english is my first and only language, and i've graduated from high school and am in collage now, so i tend to be pretty forgiving in grammar/spelling).

spellcheck won't catch a lot of errors, as it only trips on things that aren't words, but many misspellings are words, just not the right one (like "We cocked our meal". "cocked" is a valid english word, but it definitely isn't the word you meant to put in).

even grammarcheck isn't 100%, but it does supplement and give a reasonable catch rate, though there is still no substitute for eyes, preferably lots of them, recalling Linus's Law, which is just as valid for writing as it is for software.

maybe sometime when i have time (since i've started a new job, not a comodity that i have in great abundance) i'd want to take and whomp up an edited version of one of your chapters.

EDITED: every critique of spelling or grammar will contain at least one spelling and/or grammar error, and this one is no exception.

well people i haven't been progressing well in my story so i took some time off.

I been feeling very creative however so I thought I'd write a song for this story.

this song writing need was inspired by listening to LACUNA COIL

hope you all enjoy

song title "WHO ARE WE"

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WHY MUST THINGS BE THE WAY THEY ARE.

I understand this this torture
WHY MUST EVERYONE BE SO FAR
This feeling isn’t couture

I see I see

Who are we who we who we are
I just want to fly .. I haft to soar
Got to go forward .. I must push on
Don’t get in my way .. I can’t be stopped

A shadowy past marks the days of my life
I CANNOT CONCEIVE IT ALL
Not once have I received .. Your praise
You words where lost

I see I see WE JUST GOT TO MOVE ON
I see I see

I WANT TO FORGET ABOUT IT ALL
Believe I’d survive if I fall
YOUR NOT BIGGER THAN ME I KNOW YOUR SMALL
I can’t breath unless you let me be

PAIN AND AGONY .. ALL OF MY WANTS AND ALL OF MY NEEDS
OPEN YOUR EYES AND YOU WILL SEE

You’ll see
You’ll see

Who are we who we who we are
I just want to fly .. I haft to soar
Got to go forward .. I must push on
Don’t get in my way .. I can’t be stopped

Who are we who we who we are
I just want to fly .. I haft to soar
Got to go forward .. I must push on
Don’t get in my way .. I can’t be stopped

Who are we who we who we are
I just want to fly .. I haft to soar
Got to go forward .. I must push on
Don’t get in my way .. I can’t be stopped

Why must we suffer .. these days of our lives
THERE MUST BE AN END TO THIS
My eyes are now shut .. my ears are now closed
I DON’T WANT PAIN T DON’T WANT FEAR
I JUST WANT SYMPATHY.. MY SAFTEY

I see I see
Why must we be tortured
Why must we be afraid
Why must we be shunned
Why must we why must we

I believe I believe

Why must we be tortured
I believe I believe
Why must we be afraid
I believe I believe
Why must we be shunned
I believe I believe
Why must we why must we

I see I see
THIS DAY MAY NEVER BE

I see I see
THIS DAY MAY NEVER

I see I see
THIS DAY MAY NEVER BE

I see ……… I see

I'm aware that it is goth but i hope you guys like it anyways
hey animal. how goes it?

let me begin by saying that this story so far is truely great. you underestimate yourself!! your writing is skilled and it's good that you take the time to write it before you type it out. i too do the same thing when it comes to writing. if you read my trilogy with bluedragonrider, you can obviously see some typos and things that i need to correct but other than that you can tell that i spent a long time in the plot and bringing the reader into my story.

that is the number one rule in my book, is to make the reader feel like he/she is emersed in the story….is seeing in feeling everything that is going on. trust me when i say this. you have a talent in writing. everyone who writes starts out rough but as time goes, you will master yourself and become a great writer.

you have a big 10 from me on this story bro. very interesting and planned out. check out my trilogy when you grab some time. you may used some of my form if you wish. if you have any questions about writing let me know. i took college english and i've learned alot from it.

talk to you soon and i look forward to part 4.
take care,

nony wolf

ps - hehe
Hey, Animal… Like the others have already said, this is quite the story! And I must add that some of those … 'concerns' .. mentioned up-front (grammar and spelling) have been improving. I'm glad that you're taking the criticism in the way that it is intended. Keep up the good work, man!

(If you'd like, I would gladly stand in as a proof-reader, too. It sometimes helps to have someone else look at a story, or whatever, to catch some minor things; a fresh pair of eyes, you could say! As you mentioned earlier, this isn't something to just hand over to one of your buds in the neighborhood, so… a situation that is entirely anonymous may be a solution.)

Looking forward to more!!!

Ch 4
-vision awakening-

I’m just laying on Kel’s back as he was flying through the warm breeze. Looking at the sky, splotched clouds dotting my field of vision. There wasn’t a lot of sun, the water was rippling due to the wind coming off his wings. A few weeks have passed since that awful dream, and I have been really moody since and always on the edge. But Kel hasn’t had any problems with it. I watched as the birds flew by, as we soared through threw the air. As they road the thermals feathers falling into the breeze.

“So how are you doing tom … you feeling better”
“Not really still woozy from…” All of a sudden I passed out, it was hours later when I woke up ,on some patch of grass. Kel was staring at me intensively.
“you worried me when you fell in the water”
“sorry to scare you”
“no problem”

I stood up staggering to my feet, the patch of grass I was on was, slippery with the water I had obtained. I proceeded this action by slipping the grass went squish. Kel started to laugh, it was contagious so I couldn’t help but to laugh along with him.

“that’s more like it you haven’t laughed in weeks”
“I know, I just been feeling worried lately”
“a man it happened a long time ago”
“but it could always”
“Don’t say it, stop thinking like that” Kel interrupted I just sat their looking at the imprints on my hands. You could hear the sound of crickets, chirping the silence was awkward.
“I don’t want to loose you to yourself, I care about you to much”

Oddly enough I never heard him talk like this before.
“what you mean”
“ I may act tough but I love you to much to see you, eat away at your self like this”
“it’s just “ with tears flowing down my face,
“I’m just so afraid, a few weeks ago I felt something.”…”different I felt like I lost my self”

Slowly but compassionately he went and hugged me, his warm embrace made me feel safe.
“don’t be afraid anymore I’m here for you”
The ambiance of the day stopped the air got warmer time seem to stand still.
“I’ve been so selfish Kel, I’m sorry”
“just stop saying sorry ok”
I wiped my face
“yea”
Why is it so hard for me to see all the love I ever need is right in front of me.

We suddenly heard a noise Kel turned around, the light hit me like a blinding flash. It knocked me to my feet
“awww…my eyes…it burns…my eyes…awww” the pain never have I felt such agony.
“I can’t see Kel where are you”
He must have standing next to me cause I didn’t hear him move, something had his attention.
My eyes where bleeding all over the grass, my helpless body hobbled on the ground. This pain was the only thing reminding me I was alive, I felt myself ascend into insanity. I was screaming so loud now that I couldn’t hear anything but the sound of my blood meeting the blades of green which where a mere 6in from my face. This finally snapped back his attention.

“Tom … Tom … Tom … what’s wrong what’s happening to you… I don’t know what to do”.
Panic in his voice, anxiety, and a dash helplessness. I was starting to loose it ripping at the grass like a mad man. Cursing with pain and anguish for it to go away. Finally he did the only thing he felt he could do, he gave me yet another hug only there was more fear in it. His big wings blocked out the sun.

Slowly and slowly I started to feel better, inch by inch my sanity returned to me. My breathing which was heavy slowed , the blood stopped flowing just like that. I still couldn’t see but personality I was afraid to try to.

“are you ok” clearly he didn’t know how to ask this.
“no … my eyes… I think I lost my sight”
“here” He ripped off a piece of my shirt(a thick piece) and wrapped it around my eyes.
“this should do it” he lowered his wings slightly being cautious just in case.
“much better … thanks Kel don’t know what I do without you”

I felt my self adjust to my situation rather quickly, my other senses where quick to pick up the slack. I could hear everything twice as good as before I could hear the grass sway in the gentlest of breezes, I could hear the beating of Kel’s heart which was pretty rapid.
“let us be on our way I’m tired of this place”
“wait I hear that noise again Tom”
“we have our selves a spy … show yourself out of the bush with you” I exclaimed

A loud rustle sound was all the confirmation I needed.
“what does he look like Kel”
“well … a dragon” perplexity in his voice
“that’s a change, what’s your name stranger”
“Urik” he was obviously shy
“hello Urik … so what brings you here”
It took awhile for him to answer,
“I heard some screaming and whoa… what’s wrong with your eyes”
“none of your business” I snapped

“a take it easy Tom, relax he didn’t mean any offense by that”
“your right, sorry Urik” I had scared him with that.
“oh… it’s ok, my fault really should have been more aware of my words”
“where you from little one” asked Kel
“I’m not little”
“of course” he butted in
“ humph… well a nearby village if you need to know” he sounded pretty young and my condition doesn’t allow me any details about him.

“a Kel you in the mood for society”
“it’s been a long while, you bet I am”
“alright then take us to your village”
“ok” excited his tone was.
Kel took my hand in both uncertainty and guidance,
“how you doing their buddy”
“much better thanks” I gave his hand a light squeeze.

Walking felt disorienting and a bit frightening.
“I got you” he whispered the sound of the grass crumpling, and dirt kick up along with the brisling wind made for a very calming walk. We had decided this would be best for me until I got use to things the way they are. After nearly 20minutes I have achieved independence, but like the hand holding once in a while giving a little squeeze.
“almost their”
“alright” I turned to my lest and gave Kel a smile, he laughed we where as relaxed as could be.
“here we are… my little village” He was being modest cause it was huge, it was very boisterous it was a lot to handle at once. I buried my face in his back.
“that shit is really loud” I spoke aloud
“nothing to worry about I got you” We held hands again I like this very much.

“I’m back everyone”
“the prince is back” A member of the crowd shouted
“prince” I said confused
“should have told you that earlier, well we’ll get into that later” They where starring at me I felt a cold resent, anger, and disarray.
“they don’t like me, I can feel it”
“nonsense” clearly trying to calm me
“your human they aren’t use to seeing your kind” Urik interrupted
I could picture their eyes in my mind, I was not welcomed.
“you might be right” trying to sound cheerful
“hmm how about we eat it’s late, food is a good social event here”
“no thanks I’m tired, but you two go ahead”
“lets drop you off at your place of stay then”
This took a few more minutes, and by this time I was yawning uncontrollably.

Kel went and gave me a little lick for reinsurance, I didn’t want him to leave me not like this.
“ have a nice meal you two” I went to sleep rather quickly, my experience left me drained. Some how I managed to feel at peace, this was a rather nice feeling. I must have been out for hours when I finally awoke, it was midnight now.
“odd” My bandage was on the floor next to me must have fell off it was when I reached for it that I realized.
“wait a minute I can see” My vision was ultra sharp, I could see even better than before. I still had blood crust around the edges of my eyes, felling around I also felt that they where shaped different, very narrow and sharp around the edges. I had decided to head out for a bit and try them out, Kel was sleeping next to me he looked more attractive then ever before. The area of the forest which would have been dark was crystal clear to me.
“I could get use to this” I then headed out for a bit.
“I’ll be back soon” I whispered

…To be continued

lol I was afraid it was going to be to short, but at the same time this was a setup ch some interesting stuff is going to go on and i figured nothing in particular was going on, so rather than stopping mid-way of action I decided I'll get it all in ch 5.

my focus in this was to establish plot which i had previous failed at, i'll around the clock to get ch5 out their soon and make up for the size of ch4.

I noticed I dialog like crazy does anyone here dislike this?

thanks for reading everyone
well people like before and for the rest of the story in between the ch i will be write up a song for the most recent ch which as of Friday became ch 4.

so i took the liberty to write a song

hope you all like it

———-chain of misery————

This chain of misery
Is binding…

Can’t break from memories of the past…

Don’t understand why I haft to feel this way
I only understand I must ..get.. Free.. of it

[CHORUS:]

I feel pain in my heart …
I feel it in my soul…
I feel it in my every where…
Just can’t lose control of me

Why does everybody want to make me …
Look like a fool
Like I don’t have feelings of my own …
That can be crushed

I feel all alone
Why am I so blind to see
That all my loved ones are right in front of me

Why can’t I see …

[CHORUS:]

I feel pain in my heart
I feel it in my soul
I feel it in my every where
Just need someone to help me

This darkness wants me…
It asks me to hurt myself
So I can release this pressure
Building up inside me

Must break away from the feeling …of regret

I feel hungry to be
the way I …use to be…

Before that day came to me
Before I was changed Forever

[CHORUS:]

I feel pain in my heart
I feel it in my soul
I feel it in my every where
It isn’t my fault
So why can’t I breath

When ever I think of it
I shudder
I can’t seem to shake it
Hurry up and hold me

[CHORUS:]

I feel pain in my heart (feeling it in my heart)
I feel it in my soul (my soul)
I feel it in my every where… (every where)
All I need is some one to save me

Save me from me

Save me from … me

hope you guys like it
the next ch half way done been working around clock

i give it to later this week, trying to distinguish my fight sequence from dragon x's fight sequences this is not a comparison, i just feel that sometimes i may be starting to come close to coping seeing that reading dragon x inspired me to finally start writing that dragon story i been planing on doing for so long

this ch will keep true to it's goth theme i have developed for it, but it will have a dimension i feel it has lacking which is story speed.

up till now it's been slow moving which works but action is needed in order to propel the story further.

and we also get back to the sex as well which should be significantly improved over the last two, which is the hard part if you ask me, and unlike the last on it will be quite a bit longer at least 3 *word* pages long.

really excited

well i can write all day but i must continue my story
lol shadow

let me start off by saying thanks for viewing everyone, really means a lot to me trying to write the best all around story i can.

and yes i am trying to improve the sex scene that part will not lose my attention.

next question:

I'm planning on having it out by end of this week, a bit short time i know, but trust me i won't release it unless i know it's the best i can do.

coming along with it real well

thanks everyone

gotta go
i would be lying if i dont say this so im going to just say it.

iiiiiiiiiiiiiiii tolllllllldddddd yoooooouuuuuuu soooooooooOOOOoooooo.
hahahhhahaa…….just kidding at you.

hey animal, how are you?
sorry i havent been in lately to talk with you. been working here on the base and havent had the time ((or patience)) to get online much. just dropping my nose in and seeing if Ch5 was posted while i was "absent".

anyways, reread the entire thing. just to refresh my memory on the story. that way when Ch5 drops i wont be forgetting anything. **thumbs up to you** keep it up, its coming along greatly and you just need to open your imagination. trust me mines ALWAYS open and it gets me into trouble. lol.

im positive that when Ch5 hits i'll spot it and come swooping in to read it. **thinks of that sight of a wolf flying into a book** hmmmm lol anyways,……..

catch you online sooner or later. probably this weekend or something. sound cool? meet you up in the chat or something and we can talk more.

alright bud i got to run its 1am and i have to be up at 6am……so, talk to you tonight(fri) or tomorrow (sat).
take care and have fun,
~nony wolf~

hey ….pssst……p.s.- you have the official ""Co-Producer"" on my story man. i mean it. you helped me find a name for my char. talk to you about it in pm.

wow

thats all i can say about the amount of unread comments a nice change

but a s dragonic said himself it will be out soon starting to pick up some speed again
so it won't and seeing how i have practically no work next week i have more time for this latest ch.

some good plot thickeners here their will be an up on the action ( if you can even say their was action up to this point). but I'm gonna stay true to the goth presence that i have created for the story.

well i could write forever, but gotta go

look at mid next week for the release

here we go

Ch5

– blood battle to the death–

I went outside to test the extent of my vision, Kel was sleeping not far from where I was sleeping.
“be right back” I whispered I could tell by his sleeping that he had a good time. The air took to my hair with a soft breeze that carried the lochs of my hair upward, reaching for the sky all in their own directions. The ground was wet the night water had settled on the grass, the flowers which where full of life earlier, where now sleeping. The trees slowly and gently swaying the breeze not caring where the wind was going to take them.

I took a deep breath and walked aimlessly the parts of the forest which would have looked dark where crystal clear like it was like day to me. Their was mouse scurrying about, trying not to become food for a hungry owl which loomed over head. It’s demise certain to be underway. The owl proceeded by swooping in on the mouse, the mouse weaved through the grass and at the last possible second managed to jump into a nearby tree. This took me by surprise, seeing how it was able to eluded what was seemingly certain death. The owl flew away dumfounded and still without a morsel of food to look forward to during it’s supper, quite a fitting end to that really.

“hmmm how about a test” I proposed to myself
“I know” continuing to talk aloud, I had decided that I’d find the smallest tree possible in this forest. I started to look, my eyes reading the forest like a book their was no tree small enough. After a long while like 15 minutes I finally found the smallest three possible. It was 7ft tall with a 10 foot circumference, it was a very healthy three. I pulled an arrow from the quiver of arrows I constantly keep with me, And pricked my self in the thumb.
“damn that’s sharp” I said to myself , I went up to the tree and made a bulls eye on it, their was plenty of blood for the task.

I got back exactly 600yds from the target, which would have been easy to loose in the background of all those trees, if I had not marked it . I then followed this observation by pulling my bow off my back, it felt cold to the touch this is the first time I touched it in weeks.

I readied the arrow and got the target lined up in my sites, I pulled back my reflex bow. It went all the way back, I felt the power behind the pull back make the bow buck a bit then. I had gotten a lot stronger out of nowhere, for this would have been a difficult feat for the strongest of people. I damn near almost broke the thing in half, and with it being reinforced like it is it only speaks volumes as to how strong I had gotten.

I let out a breath and fired the razor edged arrow, it flew so fast that it’s site became a mere blur even for me. It hit the target I marked perfectly dead center, the wood combusted on contact wood splintering to the left, to the right and every where in between. The mixture of the burning wood and my blood, created a rather over powering odor. It’s very taste was in the air, it tasted like steel quite an awful taste indeed.

I was about to call it a success and leave when I heard a loud banshee like shriek come from the direction of my burning target. It was louder than any sound I had ever heard before, it sounded like the devil himself had conjured this behemoth of a sound . My increased hearing only made it worst, I had to cover my ears, it felt like they where going to burst right out. My vision was going blurry and I had a hard time keeping my balance.

“f***, god damn this shit” At the top of my voice.
“bitch shut the f*** up” I then pulled out my arrow, and shot one at what ever it was. The arrow flew devouring the distance between us like a flame on a dry piece of hay. Though not as fast as earlier, given my lack of concentration.

“bitch should be getting… what the hell” surprised even at that speed it managed to dodge it for the most part only grazing it’s shoulder, which did manage to shut that damn bastard up. Once I regained my senses, I could see it better. It looked half dragon half something else, from the waist where the typical scales of a dragon. Blue scales at the waist point with slow progression to yellow which where at the lower part of it’s legs.

It’s upper body was covered in a thick fur, which caught in the wind looked pretty intimidating. The color was of a crimson red, fused with a Safire blue and it had on his wrist a pair of golden wrist bands. It had the face of a dragon and a pony tail of the same color as the rest of his fur. Quite hot somehow, if we weren’t going to be in a conflict.

“blood I smell…blood” in a hissing tone, I could tell it was a he by the sound of his voice. He looked back at me after finally taking his head down, he hardly felt my shot.
“ha ha a human theirs no way this blood I smell belongs to you” In question
“where is the owner of this wonderful scent”
“your looking at him right now” aggravated and a bit timid
“well if you insist then” he pulled out his claws ready to make contact with his target.

I readied myself as best as I could, getting into stance. Standing in a back stance with my body to the side, with my left arm extended fingers spread out. My right hand at my belly hand fully extended and point forward like a sword. My eyes locked on the creature like a arrow that’s being ready to be launched.

“ha-ha-ha…Mister tough guy…well if you insist we shall” with murder on his mind
“bitch come bring it” talking tough to deflate my worry
“it would be my pleasure…human” in a blink of an eye he appeared half way to me, he took another step and then phased out, I looked around.
“where the hell is he” astonished and still looking, their was a <wush> sound, and then out of nowhere like a lighting flash he appeared. This took me back but not before he preformed a leaping kick dead on my nose.

His kick as soon as it landed on my nose was accompanied by a <cracking> sound, for sure my nose was broke.
“awww…my nose…you fucking bastard” he them immediately came back with a turn around back kick into my chest.
“ufff” I went flying through the air like a vertical cyclone. First heading up then into the air, then down landing straight on my head.

I rolled over coughing up blood, in a few big red chunky globs. They landed on my broken chest and slid down my abdomen.
“bitch can kick” I said to myself with a slight laugh, he then walked up to me sensing no possible threat.
“what’s so funny…human…last thing I knew you where on your back” he was a bit pissed off
“none of your dam business” coughing up more blood, my lungs felt like they where going to collapse into my heart and lungs. I then coughed up my third glob this wasn’t looking good for me.

“hmmm…still want to talk… I’LL MAKE YOU TALK…PAIN” spoken in a slow angry hissing tone, he gave my chest a good stomp, right in the sternum.
“awwwwww…GOD!!!!” I exclaimed in pain, rolling over a few more times, reaching my hands into the air I couldn’t catch my breath.
“aw…aw…aw” I finally caught it, blood wasn’t being coughed up now, rather flowing from the sides of my mouth.

“that’s more like it …your pain makes me happy…ha-ha-ha” he drew out his claws
“what to do with you…I know I’ll toy with you” laughing in a sickly voice, after my body.
“alright this should hurt a lot” his claws where 9in long each, which he used to begin his work, he began to use them to carve my right shoulder, he then tore them out abruptly.

“awww…you…mother…fucker” huffing and puffing, about half of the nails length went into me before striking bone. Blood poured out of my slash wounds like a sea of red. He then brought his blood drenched claws to his face, first he sniffed them and then he gave the red syrup a taste.
“blood…sweet wonderful tasting blood… the best I ever had…I want more of it” excitement in his voice, he began slashing wildly and randomly all over the place. The pain of being carved open like a turkey was to great. I almost passed out from it but I couldn’t, I counted 8,10,17 no their where 25 [SPAM] of slashes all over me.

Each one where like a fountain of red mineral water to him, just flowing with no end.
“oh…your going to die…right here” sounding like that of a mad ma, he took a step back and lowered himself to the ground. And then with a huge gust he jumped into the air. He went high, high up suddenly it made sense to me.
“he’s going…to crush me” trying to force my body to move but with no success the injuries my body had suffered where way to sever.

I saw him beginning to peak, and smiling down at me.
“He won’t miss he’s going to kill me here and soon” scared, but something deep inside me told me that I couldn’t die here, not like this. With a loud roar
“I won’t die to you” I began to get movement in my arms and then slowly my legs got them as well.

“what…you shouldn’t be moving …you human …just lay and die already” concern was now present in his voice, I was able to scoot myself onto my but. Outputting more blood from my body, onto the floor.
“hurry up tom or your dead” my eyes fixed on his quickening decent
“he’ll kill you before you can stand” at that moment everything went dark, their was a dot of light though. Slowly it got bigger until their was a flash of red light.

“ROAR” at the top of my voice, I jumped to my feet he was only 30ft from me when I did this. And with another roar I reached my arm into the air, and caught him by his face.
“got cha” with a deep tone in my voice, I pulled his body into mine and started running. I jumped and lower his body toward the ground. Once he met the ground I used the back of his head as a slide, digging a long streak path into the hard dirt.

I then let him go and slid a bit pass him, only to do a back flip and come crashing on his chest. I thought it would only be fair to return his friendly contributions to my current and not so favorite condition. Only I had gained 3 times my body mass due to my sudden awakening, so like me he to had a pair of broken ribs. I just stood their with my hands crossed enjoying the sight.
“get…the f***…off of me” in a labored breathing pattern
“gladly” I spoke sarcastically, I proceeded by pulling back my right foot, now all my weight was at one point. And with a <oomph> I put all my force, and anger into a kick which was precision aimed for his chin. The sound resembled that of a thunder clash, as his body ripped from under my left foot. Which left a huge indent in his chest, his limp body flew through 5 trees as he went 300yds away from me. The leaves still hanging in the air as he hit the ground.

I grabbed one of the falling leaves lush ,green ,and still covered with dew. I crushed it in my hand my grip was intense, I was about to throw the pieces to the ground. When I realized that it was actually heavier now, and cold very cold.
“wow…I can condense water” I found this pretty interesting and potentially useful, I then took a few more of those leaves. I then crushed the together, and made one huge ice spike. By this point the had gotten to his feet, so I carefully put it down.
“so what you f***’n punk ass…you can make ice…big whoop” spitting out blood from his broken jaw.

He began charging at me.
“come to me…and die” he was much slower now that fatigue and injury had set in.
“no more feet just claws for you” he began slashing at me aimlessly but surprisingly quick. Their was no where for me to go but back. He threw a strike aimed for my stomach, I blocked that one. Then he swung with his left claw I barely dodged his head strike.

I choose to dodge into the direction of the kick going to the left, suddenly I saw a kick flying from that direction.
“shit” like bad weather it met with little resistance as it hit me in the head. I quickly let go it felt like getting kicked in the head by a horse.
“got you good…huh” surprised, for it met with very little visual success. I had on that note retained my footing through that God awful kick.

“no way…that was all I had” I was now really pissed off, remembering the spike I picked it up off the ground and threw it at him. With all my force, it went through his shoulder like a knife through butte. Not wasting any time I ran up to him and began throwing a flurry of kick and punches. First a few to his face and then a few to his chest. He then jumped back and then threw a last resort kick for my face.
“it’s now or never” he reeked of depuration, but his efforts where in vain for It didn’t take me by surprise.

“poor fool… bad choice for a depuration shot” I ducked under his kick and grabbed his leg. From their I kick the side of his right knee and broke it outward.
“aww” in pain
“not done yet” I followed that action by bringing my right elbow crashing into his kicking knee. <crackle pop>
“you…aww…aww…aww…my knee” I finished the devastating counter with a right crescent kick into his chest. Holding onto his left leg, while his bent and twisted. <snap>
“awwwwww” I then let him go his body fell limp to the ground.
“what are you…your not human at all”
“ha-ha…and soon your not going to exist at all” his eyes opened wide fear consumed.

“you you wouldn’t you couldn’t” panic in sued
“watch me” now speaking with the upper hand, I stepped onto his right knee. <snap>
“thought I should make sure”
“bastard” the agony caused him to put his hands over his head. He then pointed out at me.
“I’ll have you d…” before he could finish I grabbed his hand, and with my left leg I stepped on his stomach. I then pulled as hard as I could.
“not my hand to” completely engulfed in fear, the nerve and muscle tissue began to tear out of place inch by steady inch like a slug slithering across a stone.
“let go of my hand” futility slashing at my leg and back, I reached a stall point.
“there” I took one final tug and <rip> it came snapping off blood pouring from both his arm and his dismembered hand like symbols clashing they met.
“you stole my hand …give it back” holding his wrist with his other hand, not that it stopped the bleeding any. I toke a step back.
“hmm…are you sure…well if you insist” and with that I threw it claw first into his abdomen.

“not…like …” nine inches of piercing death where now stuck in him unrecoverable. I felt his spirit begin to leave his crippled body.
“you…whatever you are…I’ll see you in h” but before he could finish his dieing words, I stomped on those nails of death. Ending his pitiful existence once and for all. His body lost all signs of life, and there where no movement except the flowing rivers of blood that have yet to stop their journey out of his body.

My mind went blank I didn’t know what to think.
“I guess I survived…I actually survived” I turned and took a few steps, my pains have reemerged but only worst they brought me to my knees. I was vomiting blood uncontrollably. I felt one last sharp tug in my chest, then I passed out.

I awoke to Kel kissing me, trying to resituate me.
“oh thank god your alive I been trying to bring you back for 10minutes” starting to cry
“I thought I lost you for good” he hugged me crying into my ear, I began to cough a steady stream of blood onto his back.
“that’s right tom let it out” still filled with tears, his warmth made me feel better like always.
“not so tight Kel…it hurts all over” I said in a laughing tone thankful for being alive, thankful for Kel’s love.
“sorry about that” concerned
“no prob”

“I already called for Urik him and his medical crew are on their way”
“sounds good to me” tired and unable to move, I looked over to my right and saw that mouse from earlier.
“looks like we both made it out alive” I spoke softly
“you say something”
“no just talking to myself…that’s all”
“sir Kelzar” a voice came from the distant
“prince Urik and his medical crew have arrived”
“thanks for the Intel”

“TOM what happened are you alright” Urik spoke in concern
“lets just say bad man for right now and leave it their” feeling comedic
“Prince there is another body here though not as fortunate as our friend here” a member of the medical crew spoke.
“torn up pretty bad… I mean really bad…we lost him moments ago”
“you mean” Urik looking back at me, he couldn’t believe his eyes. The crew finally assembled around me ready to pick me up.
“careful now” the head member stated
“on three” they raised me onto a tarp, not fancy but it wasn’t like I had far to go or anything. My body ached even more from their mere contact, but shit only way from point a to b so no argument here.

I passed out again, this time under safe conditions. I awoke to the sun striking my eyes.
“shit that hurts… oh dam that really hurts…you got to be kidding me” I look over into the darkest part of the tent, I could see plain as day. But when I looked at the daylight it burned my eyes.
“well that sucks I grew to the liking of the sun” feeling a bit sad
“yea doctors can’t explain that either” Kel spoke as he walked in, he came through the light which means I didn’t see him come in.
“oh just incase you thought wrong you been a sleep for about a week” laughing
“what a week really I got to get up” I felt a sharp pain in my back
“ok I won’t” feeling like a fool
“just get your rest tom best medicine” feeling all smart like
“alright but before you leave I don’t suppose you can drag me over away from the light…it doesn’t hurt my eyes you know” being all sarcastic
“right good idea” he dragged me over to the darkest part of the tent which felt much better.
“alright I got errands I’ll be back in a while you get your rest tough guy”
“will do” and with that I closed my eyes and went to sleep. Images of that event flash threw my dreams, never have I felt so devoted to such a thing. I can’t believe I actually took a life, their where no tears no sadness in my dreams only a felling of being alive. I awoke hours later calm and with a little more mobility. It was now dark and I could see outside now, I saw shadows bouncing off the trees. It look like their was a fire nearby, I then heard cheering their where sounds of celebration.

After a few I was finally able to get to my feet.
“lets go see the festivities sounds fun” talking to myself in a anxious manner, walking was still a chore but manageable. I almost stepped out of the tent, my forward progress slow like a flame on a wick. I was met by a charging Kel.
“so you finally are awake again” spoken in delight and with open arms, we just stood their in arms embrace.
“don’t you ever do that again…what ever it was that you did” a bit agitated over the whole event.
“you know I” he cut me off right there with a warm a passionate kiss on the lips. We where looking eye to eye, the warmth I felt from his love made me forget about my pains. He was my love my better half he was the half of me that made life good for me. Though I felt guilty for last night through my struggle not once have I thought about him.

“I’ll always love you Tom nothing not even death can change that” as he broke off our kiss
“I love you to Kel” this for some reason made me begin to sweet, while we where hugging my right hand slowly made it’s way down his body. I lightly cuffed his balls in my hand.
“oh it’s been a while are you sure…oh that feels good” pleased by my latest action.
“well we can take it easy for now…don’t want to hurt you”
“good for me” spoken in a low sensual tone, I started to massage his sheath but not for long for his red member started to creep out. Meaning I was now massage his well endowed cock, pre cum was starting to flow out and onto my hand.

My hand was naturally pickup some lubrication his cock still soft but still growing. It was bigger than I remembered which started to get me excited as well, now it was fully erected.
“it’s a big guy remember” he spoke in a playfully
“I do now…quite a big guy indeed” but my attention never shifting from his eyes, which where now closed he was really enjoying it.
“it’s been way …to long” the pace of his breathing quickening, I pondered for a bit then decided to go ahead with it. While is eyes where closed I went down to my knees, positioning myself, looking straight ahead at the head of his huge cock.

I first gave it a lick to give his pre cum a taste. It’s been a while so I wasn’t use to the taste a bit salty actually.
“oh…where doing that now” excited by my lack of hesitation, after a few I got use to the taste not to bad anymore. I began to take it in my mouth his cock was really warm, with globs of pre cum entering directly into my mouth. Fresh straight from the hose I thought to myself, once my jaw got use to the wide opening it needed for the task to began to move my head back and forth.
“that’s…that’s…nice …really nice” in panting and in pleasure, the rhythm of his breathing along with the odors of his sweet and pre cum made me really hard.

I toke my left hand and began massaging the back of his left leg, he seamed to like this very much as well. He rested his hands on the back of my head. He started to thrust his hips in as I moved forward, lodging more of those rather tasty juices down my throat. Moaning and groaning form the pleasure he pushed his hips harder and harder, I could feel his movements jerk he was close. A bit soon but he was really horny and it has been a while so I can’t blame.
“I’m close” said in a low roar, I’m sure he didn’t want the others to know about this little secret of ours. This is the kind of thing that could ruin your image, if discovered like this.
“just about” trying to keep it low with great difficulty, he was now moving as hard as he could go and as far down my throat as he could go.
“there” he let out a rather loud roar, which surprised me I could tell his need for release was great for his cum was coming out like a jet stream. I tried to catch all I could before I had to breath, I then pulled off. The steady stream of white delight was still make contact with my face, as it started to slow. He was huffing and puffing the excitement had clearly gotten the best of him.
“WOW…that was great…by far the best yet…although I was a bit loud at the end hope no one heard it” trying to control the pattern of his breathing, we just laid side by side holding hands looking into each others eyes. We where laying in our sweet and his cum, a bit sticky but neither of us cared I had worst.

He looked over at me with intent.
“let us not forget my lover here” he was now calm and frisky again.
“we’ll just keep this light alright”
“sure” I smiled, he pulled down my pants and my little friend sprang out.
“excited aren’t we “ he lower his mouth onto my throbbing cock much easier than I could do for him. Good thing he has retractable teeth or else this would really hurt.
“right to the chase I see” he was using his tongue to massage my cock and catch my pre cum, which was way less than the amount he was outputting earlier. He had established a quick tempo, I then settled my hands on the back of his head which was moving up and down. This was the best felling I felt in ages I couldn’t help but to raise my lower back bringing my balls closer to his face.

He then put his hand under my ass and started to lift my member closer into him, making it so he can go down deeper than before.
“that’s it right there” my breathing heavy and increasingly uncontrolled, I been long over do for a feeling like this. I felt like an armature at this, for I wasn’t going to last much longer. I was in complete bliss, I didn’t care if someone walked as long as this feeling wouldn’t end soon.
“damn…nearing the end” feeling a bit pissed by that, all I could do was focus on his head bobbing up and down on my cock. He looked like he’s been doing this for years, and probably has been. I dug my hand into his head as I got ready to let loose, some pent up tension. He felt me jerk, and with that he started move his head like a earth quake. I only had about 15 seconds of this before I blew off my load.

With that I let out a roar even louder then his, which never happens completely unaware that we weren’t far from potential ears. Heaving on the floor I was trying to speak but to no success. He did a great job catching my cum hardly and hit me. He just laid on top of me lightly, I was still tingly from our little session.
“you feeling better now”
“yea…I feel much…better” we just laid their feeling each others warmth, then something caught my eye. I looked over to my right and I saw Urik standing in the doorway, I didn’t know what to do. He just stared at me, with a sly look on his face.
“so that explains it…why didn’t you guys tell me … next time count me in…I have nicer places than this” and with that Kel and I just looked at each out and smiled.
“A Urik can you lets be in private for a while”
“sure thing Kel” with that Kel and I both exhausted fell asleep in each others arms into a deep slumber.

To be continued

hoped you guys enjoyed it

**bows low**
this was great animal, truely amazing.

you made the words flow and the fight scene blend into absolute visual imagary. i got a great mental image like a movie being played out of what was happening. you have finally found it bro. i love it.

you stepped it up as well. i applaud you! this was a long awaited chapter. but the wait was worth it.

you have my rate of 10 of course.
thanks for helping me out with my story. its still in the typing stages. and like i said and will keep saying. you're "co producer" on this one! hahahah

well i got to get back to typing it!!
this was a great chapter. you outdid yourself and it was great.
loved every bit of it.

talk soon.
take care and have fun.
~~nony wolf~~
i just read last chapter very nice but…it was very confusing especially the fight scene in some places where words were left out i do have one question though: im not positive or anything put i dont think an arrow has the range of 1800ft or 600yards or at least not accurately see im kinda a gun fanatic and the maximum range for a beretta M9 is about 600 yards maybe you meant to say 60? maybe a arrow caould travel 600 yards but i doubt it would be very accurate. just wondering what you meant.

oh yeah from me you have a "10" or will in 70 something more posts

–Face down–

Face down
In the thick of this
Losing my mind and my soul
Face down
There’s no time to cry

It’s a constant struggle
To keep myself afloat
Keeping my head
Above my neck

Confused and upset
They keep targeting me

My rage is slowly building
You see it in my eyes
Only (only)
At the end of this
Will you see the value
Of life

Face down
In the thick of this
Losing my mind and my soul
Face down
There’s no time to cry

Face down
In the thick of this
Losing my mind and my soul
Face down
There’s no time to cry

I get this tingly feeling
When my blood goes from blue to red
And yes it hurts me (hurts me deep)
I view the face of death
Staring dead at me

No fear
Cause I can’t hide
No back step
I’m running out room
No back up
It’s me against the world

Face down
In the thick of this
Losing my mind and my soul
Face down
There’s no time to cry

Face down
In the thick of this
Losing my mind and my soul
Face down
There’s no time to cry

Stand tall
Endorse the meaning of life
Forget your self
And you’ll surely die

Stand tall(stand tall)
You will survive
Fight hard(fight hard)
Don’t run away
Bleed if you must(bleed)
That will
Secure your place

Breath

Face down
In the thick of this
Losing my mind and my soul
Face down
There’s no time to cry

Face down
In the thick of this
Losing my mind and my soul
Face down
There’s no time to cry

>yes a .50 cal round would go farther as it is 3.7 mm wider and a lot longer but my point was that a arrow would not be able to go as far as a bullet i'll put it like this:

crossbows are easier to use more accurate and have a higher ROF than early guns the only things guns had for them was power and range. if guns werent able to hit targets from farther off we would be running around with crossbows today.

ah i just checked my facts an english longbow which i believe has the longest range of any bow has a maximum range of 350 yards i have a good quote but its rather lengthy to put in a edit

heres the quote

"The longbow had a long range and high accuracy, but not both at the same time. Modern champion archers maintain that you cannot 'guarantee' a hit on an individual target at more than 80 yards with any bow whatsoever. Most of the longer range shooting mentioned in stories was not marksmanship, but rather thousands of archers launching volleys of arrows at an entire army. Longbowmen armies would aim at an area and shoot a rain of arrows hitting indiscriminately at anyone in the area, a decidedly un-chivalrous but highly effective means of combat. In its day, it was considered amazingly accurate and, by the standards of the day, it was. Standards for accuracy have changed dramatically in the modern age. The bow cannot compare to a rifle, which can be used by a skilled marksman to hit individual targets at 600 or 800 yards. An archer could hit a person at 180 yards 'part of the time' and could always hit an army.

A Welsh or English military archer during the 14th and 15th Century was expected to shoot at least ten 'aimed shots' per minute. An experienced military longbowman was expected to shoot twenty aimed shots per minute. A typical military longbow archer would be provided with between 60 and 72 arrows at the time of battle, which would last the archer from three to six minutes, at full rate of shooting. Young boys were often employed to run additional arrows to longbow archers while in their positions on the battlefield.[8] "The longbow was the machine gun of the Middle Ages: accurate, deadly, possessed of a long range and rapid rate of fire, the flight of its missiles was likened to a storm."[9]. This rate was much higher than that of its Western European projectile rival on the battlefield, the crossbow. It was also much higher than early firearms (although the lower training requirements and greater penetration of firearms eventually led to the longbow falling into disuse in English armies in the 16th century)."

i also found that a crossbow could be accurate up to 500m but that an arbalest crossbow a iron tipped late variation on the standard crossbow

i feel that i have made my point that it is not possible for a handheld recurve bow to goo 600 yards maybe a seige bow could do it but i dont think he would be lugging that around and the type of arrow would not make a significant distance it might make it go about 20-30m farther depending on how it is fletched but it wont add 100s of meters

oh by the way chafalcar do you have a .50? i was thinking about buying a M82A1-AM .50 cal sniper rifle if you know anything about that plz advise.